We have looked at ways of making our writing more interesting for the reader. We looked at two sentences and changed the 'boring' word for a far more exciting one.... see what you think!
I went home. The tree was big.
drove huge
ran enormous
rushed large
skipped gigantic
walked tall
scootered humongous
sprinted massive
biked
hopped
flew
crawled
sped
dawdled
We will continue to write more interesting sentences and share them with you. Maybe you could write one to us...
awesome words, some of us us are working on that as well, onto some hard things for us...
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Fantastic Room 17.
ReplyDeleteRoom 7 can come up with some other words for said:
Whispered, roared, shouted, screamed, growled, explained, moaned, laughed, yelled, whined, barked.
amsome.m.o
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