Wednesday, March 21, 2012

Interesting Words

We have looked at ways of making our writing more interesting for the reader. We looked at two sentences and changed the 'boring' word for a far more exciting one.... see what you think!

I went home.                                                         The tree was big.
drove                                                                     huge
ran                                                                         enormous
rushed                                                                    large
skipped                                                                  gigantic
walked                                                                   tall
scootered                                                               humongous
sprinted                                                                 massive
biked
hopped
flew
crawled
sped
dawdled

We will continue to write more interesting sentences and share them with you. Maybe you could write one to us...

3 comments:

  1. awesome words, some of us us are working on that as well, onto some hard things for us...
    K.C room20

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  2. Fantastic Room 17.
    Room 7 can come up with some other words for said:
    Whispered, roared, shouted, screamed, growled, explained, moaned, laughed, yelled, whined, barked.

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